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The rain falls peacefully upon my skin
As the puddles gather around me,
How I relish the feeling of pure, beautiful water,
As I open my arms to the dark.

The bullets rip viscously through the sky
As scarlet people to worship
Holes upon holes tear through their skin,
But no screams or moans are heard

I recognize your face through the silver clouds
As you control the storm,
Raindrops pierce along my skin and-
You meet my eyes and smile.

Gun shots sound and they all fall
And you never seem to flinch,
Blood begins to burst and boil as-
Bad feelings reappear.

Stormy winds begin to blow
As the rain spits through my face,
The water stains begin to hurt so-
I scream but the thunder cloaks me.

Bullet casings hit the ground
As I fall beneath your feet,
I see now that your heart can’t hear
And now I can’t stop its bleeding.
©2008-2009 ~HuggyJake
:iconhuggyjake:

Author's Comments

Just a marriage poem I wrote, I was gonna put this in my portfolio but I didn't like it that much.
It does have meaning though, you just have to reeeaaallly look at it.
I probably put this in the wrong type of poetry, or made a mistake putting it in my gallery but meh, it'll end up in scraps soon

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:iconemosuz:
just to take a wack at guessing, is it about a couple getting but there is a war going on too?
:iconhuggyjake:
almost =) you're clever

--
A man with few words says nothing
While a man without words has much to discuss

--I PLEDGE MY HEART AND SOUL TO THE VEGETABLE LORD
:icongod-syndrome-addict:
Needs to think on it.

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Έχω όμως ένα πρωτότυπο
Being normal is overrated...Be different. :typerhappy:
:iconhuggyjake:
yesh yeu du

--
A man with few words says nothing
While a man without words has much to discuss

--I PLEDGE MY HEART AND SOUL TO THE VEGETABLE LORD
:iconguitar-child:
That's really cool. It kind of reminds me of something. Sweet work! :heart:

--
They can't tell me who to be
because I'm not what they see,
and the world keeps on sleeping
while I keep on dreaming for me,
and their words are just whispers and lies
that I'll never believe.
--
I just fell from grace. Wanna come with?
:iconhuggyjake:
=) thank you ever-so much

--
A man with few words says nothing
While a man without words has much to discuss

--I PLEDGE MY HEART AND SOUL TO THE VEGETABLE LORD
:iconguitar-child:
You're ever-so welcome

--
They can't tell me who to be
because I'm not what they see,
and the world keeps on sleeping
while I keep on dreaming for me,
and their words are just whispers and lies
that I'll never believe.
--
I just fell from grace. Wanna come with?
:iconemosuz:
:wow: what was missing?
:iconhuggyjake:
*sneaky smile* I fear I cannot answer that for others would see this and I wouldn't have the glory of the guessing game.

--
A man with few words says nothing
While a man without words has much to discuss

--I PLEDGE MY HEART AND SOUL TO THE VEGETABLE LORD

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